condemned to repeat it (animal Farm)
REFLECTION
Process: This was another one of my time-writings that I did. However, it was one of the worst ones that I wrote. I admit that during the time, I was on a writer's block and I wasn't really thinking. I made several mistakes in the writing. For the first part, I tried to make an intro to the situation not realizing that my audience knew the plot already. With only 20 minutes, this was a pretty hard time for me. The writing was sloppy, the ideas weren't flowing, and I wasn't able to come to a conclusion because of lack of time. This is one of the writings that incited me to start practicing time-writings on my own.
Product: Honestly, there is not much that I like about this product however I do like that I successfully put in the logical fallacy of "Lies and Half-Truths". I used the idea of how Napoleon and his companions were able to manipulate all the animals of Animal Farm into thinking that they were living a good life and that he was always right. Overall, i feel like this product was ineffectual and did not go to the point.
Growth: Since this was a timed-writing, this assignment pushed my abilities by encouraging me to organize my thoughts quickly and not waste time on unnecessary details. I learned that writing time-writings can be hard only if one is not fully prepared. I also learned that practice is something to go to when something is not working right.
Improvement: I would like to right timed-writings better by organizing my thoughts quicker and writings more condensed and get to the point. In this very sloppy writing, I truly showed what I was weak at and what I needed to work on. Instead of just stating the plot, I want to be able to get to the point with the audience and just tell them what I feel and my opinion.
Process: This was another one of my time-writings that I did. However, it was one of the worst ones that I wrote. I admit that during the time, I was on a writer's block and I wasn't really thinking. I made several mistakes in the writing. For the first part, I tried to make an intro to the situation not realizing that my audience knew the plot already. With only 20 minutes, this was a pretty hard time for me. The writing was sloppy, the ideas weren't flowing, and I wasn't able to come to a conclusion because of lack of time. This is one of the writings that incited me to start practicing time-writings on my own.
Product: Honestly, there is not much that I like about this product however I do like that I successfully put in the logical fallacy of "Lies and Half-Truths". I used the idea of how Napoleon and his companions were able to manipulate all the animals of Animal Farm into thinking that they were living a good life and that he was always right. Overall, i feel like this product was ineffectual and did not go to the point.
Growth: Since this was a timed-writing, this assignment pushed my abilities by encouraging me to organize my thoughts quickly and not waste time on unnecessary details. I learned that writing time-writings can be hard only if one is not fully prepared. I also learned that practice is something to go to when something is not working right.
Improvement: I would like to right timed-writings better by organizing my thoughts quicker and writings more condensed and get to the point. In this very sloppy writing, I truly showed what I was weak at and what I needed to work on. Instead of just stating the plot, I want to be able to get to the point with the audience and just tell them what I feel and my opinion.